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-DoodleThing- by ~-coey-:icon-coey-:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > People

©2008-2009 ~-coey-
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Artist's Comments

BAHHH!!!!!

k there's a lot I dont like about this pic. I fixed a bunch but still doesnt look like the kid is under Josh's jacket so much as a weird head from his chest. *hangs head sigh* oh well.

its been 3 weeks n havent drawn anything for myself because of school/comish/work sooooo this is the first of maybe another string of actually being able to art x__@.

characters are from my comic class story. Might post once its done for class.
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pencil. bottom darkened in photoshop.

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art n character s(c) me!
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ps- working on contest winners sketches :3 up next week mebe.

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~spiffy-username Oct 23, 2008, 9:53:29 PM
Wow, I really like your style.
Good job, doodle or not.

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~sophixer Oct 23, 2008, 9:54:31 PM
Wow, they look amazing. There's so much emotion coming from this drawing; I like this a lot. Really great work! 8D

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Mood: Joy ~kilky18 Oct 23, 2008, 9:55:40 PM
Brilliant

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~Studio-Snafu Oct 23, 2008, 10:03:04 PM
This is gorgeous. The scratchy texture and emotion in this piece really make it stand out.

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~evilwolfcub Oct 23, 2008, 10:32:45 PM
to help with the head-out-of-chest problem...

maybe adding some more shadow under "Josh's" jawline and to where the chest peaks out, behind the boy? To give you a sense that Josh is slouching over him?
This is probably hard to read... sorry.

*puts on dunce hat, and flops down in a corner*

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Mood: Joy ~Zabalou Oct 23, 2008, 10:34:44 PM
Really fantastic to see new rendition from you :)

Thanks for sharing

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~Slayde-Vasiere Oct 23, 2008, 10:36:43 PM
I think it's pretty awesome. Comics class? that's undoubtedly cool..

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~kaitoupirate Oct 23, 2008, 10:42:07 PM
Superb detail!

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~darrenclose Oct 23, 2008, 11:14:24 PM
love the detail and texture work here.
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*Shahrezad Oct 23, 2008, 11:14:42 PM
XD;;; This is just me so don't be mad but I see what you mean about the kid's head protruding from the man's chest but maybe if you created a shadow line for where the kid's shoulders are protruding slightly forward it might give the sense he has a body and isn't coming from the man's chest. ^^ Aside from that, it's beautiful work, errors aren't even a big deal seriously.

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